Reviews for Ties That Bind to date 3/03/06
(some spoilers)
Kasmira -
I know you can write many kinds and many rates of fictions including the adults. I've read all of your fics after all. However, your latest adult Peter Pan fic is so angsty that I want to scream and cry for HER. All I want to know is will it be happy ending. If it is, I'll brace myself and continue reading. If not, I'll give up and wait for another new one that less angsty. As my own life is tough enough, I don't want to have more pressure when reading.
Looking forward to your reply, and thank you.
Yvonne -
Hi, Louise
I didn't want you to upset with one more message in this final of year. But after reading chapter 7 of The Ties That Bind, I decided to send.
I only want to give you the congratulations for the character's construction Wendy.
You perfectly captured the English woman's of the Victorian era spirit. Submissive. Quiet. Ready to obey. Anxious for pleasing. It is a sad type of woman. In the current times, that behavior in the revolt. The ideas and absurd thoughts that patrol Wendy's mind are a typical line of this behavior. (After all, she was educated to be like this.) But we didn't get to have rage of Wendy, just mercy. In spite of all their neuroses, this Wendy that you created are a rich and fascinating character. Once again congratulations.
Peter is an attractive man in all the senses. He wakes up our desire. Attracted and conquest. Wendy is totally involved by him. But Peter only forgot an important detail: LOVE. He still didn't demonstrate nor it recognized his love for Wendy. The desire and the passion exist but the love still didn't take place. This circumstance is one more your wonderful creation. And it deserves applauses.
A great work, Louise.
Emma -
Hi I really like the way you said he get's dressed in his leaves that part is so cool you have to add mpre soon to it plz
Hazel -
Oh my gosh, this is so thrilling! You simply must update, i can't wait to see if the baby is Peter's!
Murphy -
Holy geez, Louis!!! This story is beyond fantastic. I just read the last few Chaps and they are truly magnificent. I mean really, your imagination never ceases to amaze me. The entire fire thing is very cool. This story is becoming quite haunting.
I can't wait to see where this is going.