Reviews for Violation parts 1 & 2 to date 3/3/06

Hi, Louise
Before anything else, excuse my terrible english.
I live in Brazil and I love your stories.
I read your story Violation. I also find the incest a disgusting and repugnant thing.
But I liked your story, because treats of a common problem in the world. It is not just a fiction. It is something that can happen at a family home.
Like you is an intelligent and fantastic writer, we were excited in reading everything that you offer us.
I found the exceptional narrative for the details: George's tormented obsession for the daugther and Wendy's innocent lust in the awakening of her sexuality.
I think you should continue because you know as driving the story without that leaves us upset.
But what does the one know I would like? I would like Peter to return. In the same age in that Wendy is now. And it showed to her the true sexual pleasure in two young that love each other.
Peter would free Wendy of that unhealthy relationship. Like in your other story: Red Handed Jill.

Hugs and congratulations for the daring story.

Yvonne - Violation Part Two

Dear Louise,
You are great!
I loved the last chapter of Violation.
It was everything that I wanted.
Peter returned... so hot... so sexy... so adult...
You do know as using the words. I adored the dialogue between Peter and Wendy. The curiosity and Peter's desire. I was moved with the love action between the two and the turn for Neverland. I liked the dignity of the Mrs. Darling, abandoning her repugnant husband.
Unforgettable story. I kept in my file with all the another that you wrote. Thank you very much for more this wonderful story.
I was very moved with your message. You spent for some difficult moments in the life but it is not sad. All of us went by some type of bad thing. But we always found the necessary force to proceed in front. “What doesn’t kill you make you stronger.” I am a famous writer's secretary here in Brazil and him says always: the good writer doesn't invent stories, he was in them, in some way. Maybe for this their stories seem so real. And healthy so touching... I cried when I read Red Handed Jill and Ruination. And laughs a lot with Asking to be Panned. All Because of Thimble is my favorite one. I already read again their histories a lot of times and it seems always the first time.
Spirited Away is fantastic. The changes in Peter's behavior, some rude times other times sweet, they are brilliant. It is incredible as the destiny is interlaced. Wendy goes back to Neverland in a sleight of hand and Peter lost his memory. But even so your love runs as river. I will accompany Spirited Away and to wait, anxious, that you retake Asking to be Panned.
Louise, desire to you all the happiness of the world because you are special.

Yvonne
(once again, sorry my poor english)